Updated Scene Outline

We have revised our scene outline and made it more detailed, this is what we are creating our storyboard from. 

1) a zoom out + pan/tilt from a close up of a gravestone to the wide shot of a church with graveyard around it

2) a shot of crucified Jesus’ statue

3) a shot of candles burning in a rack

4) a shot from the side, revealing police officers standing behind the trees (actor A on the foreground of the shot)

5) a shot from behind the tree showing two officers (actor A, actor B) preparing for the raid; one of the officers (B) saying “INSERT” in the walkie talkie; the other officer asks (A) asking him (B) “ever dealt with psychos before?”

6) a close up of the officer’s (B) face, him saying “no, never had this honour”

7) a close up of the other’s (A) face, responding with a laugh

8) return to the first officer’s (B) close up, him saying “I wouldn’t be underestimating these people, you never know what’s going on inside their head”

9) a close up of the walkie talkie and a sound of someone speaking on the other side

10) close up of the officer’s (A) face, him rushing, saying “c’mon, we gotta go”

11) a wide shot of all the police officers running out the bushes/trees into the graveyard (A,B on the foreground)

12) PoV following a spotlight from a torch rushing through the graveyard

13) frame of a police officer (A) stopping with his finger up - all the other officers freeze to his command

14) a tilt up to the window of the church - an organ music starts playing

15) a return to the policemen - the main officer (A) says “let’s move on” and all the officers run past

16) a handheld shot from behind the wall/any other stationary object framing the officers creeping towards the church’s door

17) a mid long shot of the two main officers standing on two sides of the door

18) a close up of the officer (B) looking through the door gap

19) PoV looking through the door gap

20) back to the close up of the officer (B) looking at the other officer (A) and giving him a short nod

21) a close up of officer (A) turning around to the other officers

22) a mid long shot of the same officer (A) facing the officers, showing “3,2,1” and giving a gesture to go in

23) a long shot of the group sneaking inside the church and walking down the hall

24) a close up of the psycho’s hand with a knife, scratching it against the wall as he walks past

25) switch back to the group framed from the side moving through the hall

26) a tilt down from the knife down to the floor where the blood drops

27) a mid long shot of the group stopping at the corner and the officer (B) looking around it, seeing the psycho from the back

28) a wide shot of the group surrounding the psycho in a semi circle as he stands still

29) police officer (A) shouting “put the knife down”/“get on the floor”

30) a low angle of the psycho as he turns around

31) a close up of him looking up on them in a bent down pose and hysterically laughing after a pose

32) a quick wide shot of astonished officers

33) a mid shot of the two main officers (A and B) exchanging glances

34) a close up of the psycho blowing out the candles as he stares at the officers and a cut to a blackout